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Summer- Haiku

Post by BPahl88 on Sat May 23, 2009 2:52 pm

Everywhere brown is.
The sun brings dragon fire.
Day often night short.



Just a quick little haiku for the summer now. I made it in like, a minute. Smile Next: Fall- Haiku
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Post by xStarr_x3 on Sat May 23, 2009 2:54 pm

xDD Nice haiku, BP.
The only part I'm not too fond of is the ending.

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Post by BPahl88 on Sat May 23, 2009 2:56 pm

I didn't really like that part either. But keep in mind, I was trying to link these haikus to my "Ctcle" poem. I'm challenging my self... though its fairly easy... XD
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Post by xStarr_x3 on Sat May 23, 2009 3:01 pm

"Ctcle" poem?

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Post by HS7 on Sat May 23, 2009 3:46 pm

XD

Cycle poem you mean?

And challenging yourself?

I could easily make one.

A person could give me a topic. Say, trees.

My words are already on paper in ten seconds.

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Post by BPahl88 on Sat May 23, 2009 10:36 pm

I sia dit was easy though. And yes, I meant cycle....
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