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Post by BPahl88 on Thu May 21, 2009 3:39 am

I wanted to make a quick Haiku. This one is closely related to my "Cycle" poem. It's about Spring

Green is the color.
The flowers bloom the breeze sings.
Then green turns to brown.


I might make a a haiku for each season. I don't know yet...

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Post by Hazel on Thu May 21, 2009 6:41 am

That's cool, I like it XD
Spring here is probably the ugliest season there is, but you make it sound nice Razz

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Post by 2bAgen. on Thu May 21, 2009 4:04 pm

*laughs*

Sping? Isn't it Spring???

Spring is my favourite season...

Summer - too hot
Winter - too cold
Autumn - When the bugs come to stay warm in our house.

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Post by BPahl88 on Thu May 21, 2009 8:44 pm

Lol. Yes, I did mean Spring. Haha...
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Post by HS7 on Thu May 21, 2009 8:45 pm

XD

Sping...

^^

Yeah. It's mine too. Except, I only like it so much 'cause I was born in that season.

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Post by Hazel on Thu May 21, 2009 9:26 pm

Haha wow I didn't even notice the typo ha I wouldn't Razz
Spring here is really gross, all the snow starts to melt and turns brown from mixing in with the dirt, everything is aways wet and muddy, and it's too warm for sweatshirts and too cold for tshirt.....but I like the poem, cause I like the idea of a pretty spring Razz

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Post by HS7 on Thu May 21, 2009 10:39 pm

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Oh ew....

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Re: Sping- Haiku

Post by BPahl88 on Fri May 22, 2009 4:14 am

Wow. That's some... nasty stuff.

Our spring here is always times for allergies. And mine are bad in the spring. Ugg.. pollen and all that crud get in my eyes and nose...
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Post by Hazel on Fri May 22, 2009 6:31 am

yep it usually goes by pretty fast which is at least good anyways...I think a lot of people have allergies around spring time XD

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Re: Sping- Haiku

Post by BPahl88 on Sat May 23, 2009 3:36 am

Yeah. They do.

I'm making one for summer now... Smile
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Post by HS7 on Sat May 23, 2009 3:36 am

Summer~!

YAY for summer~!

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Post by 2bAgen. on Sat May 23, 2009 4:37 pm

Hope you don't somehow misspell that...

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Re: Sping- Haiku

Post by BPahl88 on Sat May 23, 2009 10:35 pm

Lol. No, I didn't. ^^
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