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Post by 2bAgen. on Mon May 18, 2009 6:38 pm

Where did my confidence go?
I lost it a few years back.
I've been longing for it.
Where did it go?

I last saw it in the classroom,
When I had been told to be quiet,
It was such a long time ago,
I saw it last at school.

I lost my confidence that day,
I want it back so much.
I need my confidence again,
I lost it that day.

Has anyone seen my confidence?
It means very much to me.
Please help me find it,
Has anyone seen my confidence?

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Re: Confidence

Post by BPahl88 on Thu May 21, 2009 2:42 am

It was good. It wasn't... great. I did like how you... almmost restated the first line in each stanza at the end or the stanza. But I didn't get it. What was it supposed to be about? I was ust a bit confused...

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Re: Confidence

Post by 2bAgen. on Thu May 21, 2009 3:56 pm

Uhhh..........................................................................................................

Actually, I don't know what it's about either.

I spent 5 precious minutes on it. *pouts*

Try thinking DEEEEEEEEEEEP BP...

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Re: Confidence

Post by BPahl88 on Thu May 21, 2009 8:45 pm

Nono... I'm not saying I'm totally lost, I get the whole gist of you've lost you confindence and all, but I just... I don't know.
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Re: Confidence

Post by HS7 on Thu May 21, 2009 8:45 pm

XD

Don't know what?

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Re: Confidence

Post by BPahl88 on Thu May 21, 2009 8:46 pm

Never mind... don't know what I was talking abuot...
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Re: Confidence

Post by HS7 on Thu May 21, 2009 8:46 pm

XD

Obviously you didn't.

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