When is the Day My Life Begins?

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When is the Day My Life Begins?

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Fri May 15, 2009 2:37 am

[This one is a little off cause I ran out of words that rhymed but it still sticks with the concept.]

When is the day that my life begins
When I stop playing around
When I finally get that first place win
When I start to stand my ground

When is the day when my life will start
Is it tomorrow or today
When will I feel the will in my heart
To start it yesterday

When is the day when I grow up
When I stop being a kid
When I stop being the whiney pup
When I do what I should have did

When is the day I will love myself
When I like what I see in the mirror
When I stop living for someone else
When I start to see my life so much clearer

When is the day I will make a change
When I will do something so new
When I will get my life to rearrange
When they know that this me is so true

I wonder when my life will start
I wish it would start now
I wish that I could put my life on a chart
And make it look better somehow

I wonder how I'll start my life
How I can start to change
I wonder how it will all turn out
I wonder if it'll be strange

Its been almost 13 year
I can say my answer loud
My life, My life gets to start
It gets to start right now

The moment I chose for it to start
The moment I tell my self go
I dont know how it will all turn out
But when I find out I'll let you know

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I am not even there
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Re: When is the Day My Life Begins?

Post by Hazel on Fri May 15, 2009 2:43 am

Wow I like it, it's meaningful! Very Happy

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Re: When is the Day My Life Begins?

Post by Holleh on Fri May 15, 2009 8:52 pm

Wow, that's an awesome poem. ^^
Great job~!
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