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Apology Poem

Post by BPahl88 on Sat Apr 25, 2009 3:24 am

So I had to write an apology poem for language arts class. Unfortunatly, I wrote it on paper, last minute of course, instead of typing it, so this version will probally be a bit off. But if I can find it, I'll post the orig. one. But either or, it's a random, funny poem that I made in like, 2 minutes. ^^

But yeah, it's something along those lines. I might improvise it too, add some lines for detail. Smile
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

I'm sorry,
That I threw away you green eraser.
Neon green eraser.
Into that white trash can.
I'm sorry.
I didn't mean to.
I'm sorry.
Sorry.
Sorry, sorry, sorry.
S-O-R-R-Y.
Did I mention I was sorry?
That poor green eraser.
Neon green eraser.
Sorry...


Yeah, something along those lines... I know this is not even close to the original, but I know some of it is, maybe half...


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Re: Apology Poem

Post by Hazel on Sat Apr 25, 2009 6:29 am

Haha what a funny and random idea for a poem, I like it Razz

But I think you migh've meant threw instead of throw in the second line XD

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Post by BPahl88 on Sat Apr 25, 2009 3:45 pm

Whoops. I meant 'threw', your right.
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Post by 2bAgen. on Sat Apr 25, 2009 5:04 pm

I think it was your instead of you in the second line...

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Post by xStarr_x3 on Sat Apr 25, 2009 5:26 pm

Oh wow.. many typoes. xDD
That's funny, though.

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Re: Apology Poem

Post by BPahl88 on Sat Apr 25, 2009 7:03 pm

Me macks a lott ov sppeling errers.

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Post by Lizzluff on Wed Apr 29, 2009 8:47 pm

Bahaha xD
That's very cute!
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