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Post by Holleh on Sat Apr 18, 2009 10:37 pm

Happy
Sad
Anger
Bad
They're what we feel
The pain can be all too real
Happy: A warm feeling that you never want to lose
Sad: The feeling you wish you didn't have to choose
Anger: The raging feeling of fire on the inside
Bad: The emotion in all of us, our darkest side
These emotions make us human
They are us
And the power within
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It's just some random poem that I wrote for a writing contest this one time and saved it.
I know it's not that great, but I kinda like it.
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Post by Lizzluff on Sat Apr 18, 2009 10:40 pm

The pain can be all too real, all right x_x
It's amazing the power emotions have over us...even when they're happy.
One makes us implode, the other makes us explode. =P
Nice job (:
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Post by Holleh on Sat Apr 18, 2009 10:41 pm

Thank you, Lizzeh. ^^
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Post by 2bAgen. on Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:21 pm

That's good.

Actually I say anything that rhymes is good. I can't make ANYTHING rhyme. Even when I try REALLY hard.

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Post by Holleh on Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:44 pm

Aha, thank you. ^^
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Post by xStarr_x3 on Sun Apr 19, 2009 7:47 pm

Ohh.. Starr likes it. :3
One time, when she couldn't fall asleep, she started listing feelings in alphabetical order. xDD

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Post by Hazel on Sun Apr 19, 2009 10:19 pm

I like it, it's a really good idea too, great job Very Happy

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Post by Holleh on Sun Apr 19, 2009 10:55 pm

Thankies, everyone. ^^
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