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Post by 2bAgen. on Thu Mar 26, 2009 5:08 pm

A tapping on the glass
I turn to see the source
Just the rain outside
Like the drummers of the parade

Raindrops on the window
Bubbles suspended on the glass
Streams flowing down
Like the tears that are gone

The knocking ceases
Silence is restored
A rainbow in the sky
A bridge of light and hope

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just something I wrote in 5 minutes, on the rare occasions I get an idea.

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Post by xStarr_x3 on Thu Mar 26, 2009 9:07 pm

I like it. :3
I can see the image in mah mind.

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Post by Hazel on Fri Mar 27, 2009 1:24 am

I've done a poem about rain before XD. I like it too, super true...and it does make a pretty clear picture Smile

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Post by BPahl88 on Sat Apr 25, 2009 4:12 pm

Wow. Great imagry. Smile
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