Mountains (Short Version)

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Mountains (Short Version)

Post by BPahl88 on Sun Feb 22, 2009 3:04 am

Miles wide and miles tall,
Mountains are amazing to us all.
Topping the world in its great heights.
Topping the world in amazing sights.

With snow on it day and night,
You always have to put up a fight.
Climbing up or climbing down,
You try to reach the summit, to get the crown.

Miles wide and miles tall,
Mountains are amazing to us all.
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Just a poem that I made really fast. Isn't that good, but I do like the first stanza. The second I think isn't that good. But anywho, this is just the short version. I'll be making a longer one in the days to come. Critizism is always helpful! Colorful

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Re: Mountains (Short Version)

Post by 2bAgen. on Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:21 pm

I like mountains. Apart from the fact it's easy to fall down. And I've had a lot of accidents to do with them.

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