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Post by xStarr_x3 on Wed Feb 04, 2009 11:59 pm


Summer is what it's meant to be,
A time for me to lift my wings and soar like a bird,
Freed from my caged-in life.
With every flap, the higher I will soar,
Leaving the ground below me,
A patchwork quilt of mismatched pieces.
Whenever my wings grow weary,
I will land to find a place to rest my head.
The sunís setting rays will cover me like a warm blanket as I sleep.
And in the morning I will awaken to the
Chirps, Caws, Growls, Meows, and Croaks
Of the woodland animals.
As each day passes me by,
Iíll feel more alive than Iíve ever felt.
Carefree wonder will fill my head,
Iíll watch the sunís rays stain the skies,
While multitudes of flowers paint the grounds,
Filling the air with their heady scent.
Butterflies will dance among the flowers,
Flashing orange against the blue sky.
Bees travel from flower-to-flower,
Their humble droning creates a steady beat,
The background music for this summer day.
The vivid green grass carpets the ground beneath my feet,
Feeling soft as fledglingsí downy feathers.
A soft breeze will whisper among the trees,
Telling secrets to all who care to listen.
Outside with a laptop resting in my lap,
I let the bliss of summertime wash over me.
This is one time of the year one cannot afford to miss,
Especially not me.

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We had to write a poem about what summer was to us or something. xDD
It had to have..
Two similies
Two metaphors
Alliteration or Onemonapea
And five examples of vivid, detailed writing that appeals to the five senses.
-nodnod-

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Post by Topaz on Thu Feb 05, 2009 12:36 am

I love it! Very Happy
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Post by 2bAgen. on Thu Feb 05, 2009 5:26 pm

Nice. And summery. Exactly what we need here.

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Re: Freed.

Post by xStarr_x3 on Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:00 am

Thanks. ^^

I'm so sick of winter at this point. x.x;;
It's gone on too long. xD

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Re: Freed.

Post by BPahl88 on Tue Feb 24, 2009 12:49 am

I like this poem. Summer is comming, but I do like winter as well. But I thin that winter HAS lasted toooo long... Oh well. Spring is on the way!!!
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Re: Freed.

Post by xStarr_x3 on Tue Feb 24, 2009 9:22 pm

Thanks, Bp. ^^

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