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Alone

Post by Broken Heart on Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:27 pm

All of my surroundings are crashing down.
Everything I once knew is gone.

Let me give up.
I canít take this pain.

Overlooking some aspects.
Trying to cope.

Nothing can save me.
Iím to far down.

Eventually Iíll be gone.
Will you care?

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Re: Alone

Post by BPahl88 on Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:42 pm

Wow. Very well written and powerful. And I like how you did the A.L.O.N.E thingy. That's neat. Very good job. Very Happy

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