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Tears

Post by Broken Heart on Fri Jan 09, 2009 10:26 pm

Trying to hold back all the tears.
Hoping they wonít rush out.

Everything is crashing down on top of me.
Iím yearning for something to save me.

Apparently no one cares enough.
I might as well give up now.

Reasoning is out of the question.
But there might be a way to save me.

Show me you care. Show me you love me.
If you donít, I understand.

You donít love me-
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Re: Tears

Post by BPahl88 on Sun Feb 22, 2009 5:43 pm

Again, very powerful and the way the T.E.A.R.S went, is a very nice touch. I ssume the other one is just like that.
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