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Post by RitsukaofLoveless on Sat Dec 06, 2008 6:48 pm

My heart is like the tender soil
Where faith is planted deep
If I'm abiding in the vine
In time I'll surely reap.

You don't see trees that groan and push
To birth their load of friut
So I will do my work
To nourish every root.

Then when my heart has been enlarged
And faith bursts open wide
The luscious fruit can't be contained
It springs from deep inside.

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri Dec 12, 2008 6:21 am

Wow, that's really good! I really love the analogy that you used that the last stanza. Awesome job!

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Post by RitsukaofLoveless on Fri Dec 12, 2008 12:22 pm

*laughs*

Thanks! You seem to be the only person who noticed!

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Post by 2bAgen. on Fri Dec 12, 2008 7:59 pm

That was good...

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Re: Patience

Post by Broken Heart on Fri Dec 12, 2008 9:46 pm

Awesome poem Ritsuka!

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