Survival of the Fittest-- Revised

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Survival of the Fittest-- Revised

Post by xStarr_x3 on Fri Dec 05, 2008 9:27 pm

Only the fittest can survive,
The weakest never do.
Itís the life I live,
That some donít make it through.

Only the fittest will survive,
No one cares about the rest.
Itís everyone for themself,
Not everyone can past the test.

We strive to be the best,
We've been trained since Day One.
We're better then the rest,
We're the ones who won.

Itís survival of the fittest,
It's a test that some find too rash.
We're pushed to our limits,
But even then some of us burn and crash...
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I decided I didn't like the old one, 'cause it sounded funny to read.
So I took it and rewrote most of it.
I hope it's better now. ^^

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Re: Survival of the Fittest-- Revised

Post by Lizzluff on Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:22 pm

Woah o_o Impressiiiive!
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Re: Survival of the Fittest-- Revised

Post by xStarr_x3 on Sat Apr 18, 2009 9:31 pm

Thank you. ^^

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She's PREGNANT. With a cow. How..?!
Holleh speaks to herself. In dreams.
HOLLEHS: Now come tree-size!
Holleh talks hotter than the sun. ;o
Holleh is an IN-SPURR-AY-SHUN. Believe it.
She thinks an artichoke is a type of fish.
She also gives lap-dances. To beds.
Holleh can van like a man.
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