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Post by Sofie on Sat Nov 01, 2008 2:15 pm

So they painted over it.

And now my best friend is going away. In less than a year.

They painted over it.

This poem means alot to me right now.


Sprittusj
by Seth Wreckage

A soul made of ink
A life in permanent marker
The future gets darker
I can no longer think
Whitewash kills
Anger thrills
Don't draw that link

You wrote on the wall
I know you never let me
Perhaps you forgot me
It's all about to fall
There's no doubt
I'll be fine without
What matters most of all

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Post by RitsukaofLoveless on Sun Nov 02, 2008 4:45 pm

Awesome! What stanza was that, though??

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Post by Sofie on Sun Nov 02, 2008 7:04 pm

What stanza was what? That's the whole poem...

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Post by RitsukaofLoveless on Sun Nov 02, 2008 7:55 pm

No, like, ABBACCDAAAb or something. What order did the rhyming words go in?

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Post by Sofie on Sun Nov 02, 2008 11:24 pm

Oh, err, I think it's something like ABBACCA DEEDFFD... I don't usually keep my stanzas under control, so I'm not used to that way of thinking x'P

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