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Post by Broken Heart on Mon Sep 29, 2008 8:23 pm

I'm not the best of writer when it comes to poetry.. But this is what I came up with..

Tears

Tears slide down her face
Sadness surrounds her
All she wants is someone’s embrace
Everything is starting to blur

There is nothing anyone can do
She wishes for something to change
But she knows this is something she must work through
She still doesn’t know how it will rearrange

Still she waits
Hoping for good to come
She hopes to walk through new gates
She wonders what life will become

But now she sits
Awaiting something new
She still has to work out some bits
Thank God! She’s come through

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Post by Moonlite Squire on Wed Oct 01, 2008 7:24 pm

Wow!!
Really goood poem!!!!
It ryhmes!!!! Very Happy
Im trying to write a poem too Smile
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Post by sweetkiss on Thu Oct 02, 2008 6:49 pm

Awesome Ash!!
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Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri Oct 03, 2008 4:53 am

I agree! That's really good! I love the first stanza the most!

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