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Black and White

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Wed Aug 13, 2008 3:32 am

Black and white is so easy
theres good
theres bad
there is dark
there is light
theres pure
theres corrupt
theres truth
theres lyes
theirs life
theirs death
there is no color
nothing in between
its so easy
so simple
so sain

is a life with no color better
there is no in between
just a yes or no
no love
just life

black and white is so simple
were as
color has so many shades
a life without color would be simple
but a life with color would be a life worth living
living with life
is better than just living

so color
or black and white

machines are black and white
their all the same
all the time
in every way
they never change
but humans live with color
for that is what makes us human

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Re: Black and White

Post by RitsukaofLoveless on Wed Aug 13, 2008 11:19 am

Very deep, OoB. It takes imagination to write something that good. Awesome.
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Re: Black and White

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Wed Aug 13, 2008 5:50 pm

Thanks! Very Happy

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Re: Black and White

Post by BPahl88 on Wed Aug 13, 2008 8:20 pm

Nice poem OoB. I agree, it's very deep and rich. Very Happy
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Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri Aug 15, 2008 4:40 am

I agree, it's an awesome poem, very deep.

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Post by Broken Heart on Fri Aug 15, 2008 2:42 pm

I agree with Ritsuka it is very deep... I love it OoB!!

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Post by Hazel on Fri Aug 15, 2008 7:41 pm

Wow, awesome poem OoB!! Very Happy

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Re: Black and White

Post by xStarr_x3 on Fri Aug 15, 2008 9:44 pm

I agree with all the other comments!

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