Numb Part 2

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Numb Part 2

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Thu Jul 17, 2008 12:52 pm

I never really got it
I never understood
the way I should
feel
I walked through life with my head down
not feeling anything
not seeing anything
but today
I woke up
I put my head up
I rose it high
I looked up at the sky

and for the first time
I say the sky
I saw the sky in all its beauty
I saw the trees as beautiful
I saw things Id never seen before
I was amazing

and most of all
I felt the sun
the warmth
and I loved it
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I know its not much of a poem but its true. I realized as I woke up this morning that I had never really been happy. I mean I had been happy, but not the real kind of happy. When I got hit by a car, I think I didn't feel anything because I didn't know what it was like to feel. When someone found out about my information, I didn't care. I mean I have been living a life with no feeling, I don't know how and I don't know why but I have. So I realized the first time I felt happiness was when I found out I had friends, like really true friends, on this site! And I felt really happy, like really happy. I think that you guys kind of woke me up, and its the most amazing feeling in the world.

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I wouldn't even care
So remember me but do not cry
I am not even there

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Re: Numb Part 2

Post by xStarr_x3 on Fri Jul 18, 2008 1:58 am

That's really deep. Amazing work.

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Re: Numb Part 2

Post by Hazel on Fri Jul 18, 2008 2:21 am

I agree with Starr that was amazing! Great job!! Very Happy

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Re: Numb Part 2

Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri Jul 18, 2008 2:26 am

I agree as well, amazing! Happy

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