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The Mime

Post by Moonlite Knight on Tue Jul 15, 2008 7:18 am

I was walking down the road one day and everything was fine,
And then I turned around and realized Id been followed by a mime.
The mine was sly and sleek.
The mime knew how to earn his keep.
He would not stop until a laugh he drew from me,
Satisfied for that was how it was mean to be.
The mime believed he was quite skilled,
I wanted away before him I killed.
Sooner or later, I wandered ahead,
But we both knew, with dreams, theres no dead end.

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I woke up the other day, and this was stuck in my head for some reason. I gave up and wrote it down. It is extremely odd isn't it? don't ask what was up with my head that day, I really have no idea.

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Re: The Mime

Post by xStarr_x3 on Tue Jul 15, 2008 7:26 pm

That's good. I'm not a huge fan of mimes (they scare me. D=) though.

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Re: The Mime

Post by Broken Heart on Tue Jul 15, 2008 7:34 pm

Good job!
Mimes scare me too..
There always so quiet!!!
I can't handle quiet

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Re: The Mime

Post by Hazel on Tue Jul 15, 2008 8:33 pm

yeah mimes are scary, i've never actually seen one though, other than in movies. But anyways, cool poem! Very Happy

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Re: The Mime

Post by BPahl88 on Wed Jul 16, 2008 5:12 am

Haha. Nice poem MK. Happy

I've never seen a mime in my life either. And I agree with Broken Heart, I can't stand silence. Very Happy


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Re: The Mime

Post by GoMulchGo on Wed Jul 16, 2008 6:10 am

Um, sorry to burst your bubble, but don't you mean you agree with Broken Heart?

Anyway, you must be really creative to make that poem unintentionally. I've never met a mime before. I wouldn't mind if I did either, I can stand silence. If you and I bet that I couldn't talk for two days, I would bet my whole bank account that I could. Neutral

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Re: The Mime

Post by Moonlite Knight on Wed Jul 16, 2008 7:19 am

Thank you everyone for reading it! I find mimes facinating, though I have never met one in real life. I love the quiet, it is never quiet in my house, like right now, kratos and MS are in my room, fighting about youtube, an episode of Spongebob is one full volume, and it's past midnight. And thank you GMG, I hope I am creative Smile

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Re: The Mime

Post by BPahl88 on Wed Jul 16, 2008 2:58 pm

Whoops. I did mean BH. Haha. I get those two mixed up for some reason. Very Happy

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Re: The Mime

Post by Moonlite Squire on Thu Jul 31, 2008 1:55 am

Cool poem sis!!!!!! Very Happy
And a mime? Rolling Eyes
Mime are awsome!!! I love you

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