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Post by OliviaofBolivia on Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:20 pm

I wouldn't say I was dumb
but after all
I am numb
I cant feel anything
I'm not dead you see
I'm much alive and still free
but I'm numb
as numb can be

Its not like Im weird
I'm just fine
thank you dear
but I cant feel a thing at all

If you pinch me I dont flinch
If you push me
I wont move an inch
I'm just numb
as numb as numb can be

Can anyone tell me
when will I feel again?

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To make me feel that I am loved
You'll see me just beyond the dawn
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Do not cry on my behalf
Instead stand up, yes, get up and laugh
I wouldn't even care
So remember me but do not cry
I am not even there

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Re: Numb

Post by Hazel on Fri Jul 11, 2008 6:45 pm

Good poem! It's sort of sad in a way.... Very Happy

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Re: Numb

Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri Jul 11, 2008 6:47 pm

I agree, its awesome! But so sad too. I loved the last few lines the most!

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