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Fireworks.

Post by xStarr_x3 on Thu Jul 10, 2008 8:14 pm

I meant to post this on the fourth. But I never got around to it. xD I guess I'm a procrastinator...
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A flame ignites in the night,
Eagerly tearing up the wick.

It moves upwards,
Shooting across the sky.

Breaths are taken in,
Eyes watch the sky with wonder.

Tonight is the night of our freedom,
We'd have it no other way.

A small ringing is heard,
Then a loud thud.

As colours as strewn about,
Scribbling across the night sky.

Slowly it fades,
Breaths are let out.

And a cheer rises up.
Tonight we are free.


Last edited by xStarr_x3 on Thu Jul 24, 2008 10:27 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : Trying to make it sound better.)

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Re: Fireworks.

Post by Broken Heart on Thu Jul 10, 2008 9:14 pm

Really good..
It would have fit with the 4th but I understand why you couldn't post it..
I never came on that day, I was with my friends all day!

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Re: Fireworks.

Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:10 am

Wow, that was really good! I loved the way you ended it! Very Happy

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Re: Fireworks.

Post by BPahl88 on Sun Jul 27, 2008 4:54 am

Neat poem. (I guess it sort of goes with my fireworks drabble. Happy )

BUt either way, that was great. Very Happy

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