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Post by GoMulchGo on Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:54 am

Time for some onomatopoeia action!

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Blech! Icky!
liaaack!
Hack!
Kak!
Hackehicky blech!
Whack whack whack!
on the back
and it finally
came out of Jack.
And he's carried home
on his happy yak.

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If you know what happened poem then you know it's a little gross.
Spoiler:
He had a bunch of flem in his throat on the road so his partner whacked him on the back so it shot out.
I know it's a little short and pointless, but please (pardon the cliche) concrit.
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Re: Onomatopoeia time

Post by Hazel on Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:50 am

Wahaha that is kinda gross. Kinda funny though too. Very Happy

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Re: Onomatopoeia time

Post by GoMulchGo on Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:54 am

I'm going to make this my one thread for onomatopoeias. I'm going to put an onomatopoeia in here every time I get an idea (Hopefully it won't be gross like the last one).
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Re: Onomatopoeia time

Post by Artemis F. on Thu Jul 10, 2008 12:03 pm

That was good, gross, but good.

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Re: Onomatopoeia time

Post by BPahl88 on Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:57 pm

Yeah. it was good, gross, and funny. Very Happy Sicky Laughing
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Re: Onomatopoeia time

Post by Broken Heart on Thu Jul 10, 2008 7:08 pm

I agree with everyone else!
Gross, but good...

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Re: Onomatopoeia time

Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri Jul 11, 2008 4:08 am

Haha, I agree was well, good and gross! I liked how you rymed it Very Happy

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Re: Onomatopoeia time

Post by BPahl88 on Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:46 am

Ya know what the title reminds me of ever time I see it? The "Peanut butter jelly time" song. I swear. It's weird. "Onomatopeoia time! Onomatopeoia time!" It's creepy. Very Happy
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Re: Onomatopoeia time

Post by HS7 on Sat Jul 12, 2008 2:49 am

It is incredibly disgusting yet funny in an odd way.

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Re: Onomatopoeia time

Post by 2bAgen. on Sun Jul 13, 2008 3:58 pm

Broken Heart wrote:I agree with everyone else!
Gross, but good...
I agree with you

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