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Weird poem

Post by Dark Princess on Fri Jul 04, 2008 11:37 pm

Life and Death

Scarred be the world
Death comes to us all
Whether we like or not

Shards of glass
Shine gently in the light
Take thee's light, take thee's shine

Thy can't live
Without light
Thy can't have death
Without darkness

So how do you live
But die all the same?
Die but live?
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Post by Hazel on Sat Jul 05, 2008 5:15 am

Great poem! Very Happy I really like the first stanza.

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Sat Jul 05, 2008 7:06 am

Wow, that was a really good poem! I agree, the first stanza was the best! Very Happy

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Re: Weird poem

Post by Dark Princess on Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:23 pm

Thanks
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Post by Broken Heart on Mon Jul 07, 2008 5:50 pm

Awesome poem!!

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Post by xStarr_x3 on Mon Jul 07, 2008 9:55 pm

That was amazing. I don't really think I got the message in it, but I still like it.

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Re: Weird poem

Post by Dark Princess on Tue Jul 08, 2008 1:43 am

I was bored when I wrote this so I really dont know what it's supposed to mean either.
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Re: Weird poem

Post by GoMulchGo on Thu Jul 10, 2008 6:34 am

Hmm.... I understand the why you call it a weird poem. And I agree, it's not very interpretable.
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