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Post by Moonlite Squire on Tue Jul 01, 2008 6:59 am

As I look outside,
I see everything is fine.
The wind is blowing like the wild.
The birds are flying over the field.

The sun is shining its shine,
the clouds are in a line.
the trees are shaking with the wind.
The cars pass with a ROAR! affraid

Why oh, why did'nt i see that coming? confused
I see the children running.
"Come Back!"
"Come Back!"they yell. Shocked
The car stops...its the ice cream man.
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Re: Outside

Post by BPahl88 on Tue Jul 01, 2008 1:51 pm

Ha ha ha, I like this poem. It's funny. Very Happy
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Re: Outside

Post by Moonlite Knight on Tue Jul 01, 2008 7:22 pm

Haha, nice Very Happy

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Re: Outside

Post by Moonlite Apprentice on Sun Oct 12, 2008 5:10 am

It's OK I guess
confused
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Re: Outside

Post by Moonlite Squire on Sun Oct 12, 2008 7:22 am

Thank you peoples!!!!!!! Very Happy
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