Don't make me

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Don't make me

Post by 2bAgen. on Fri Jun 27, 2008 7:22 pm

It's not worth it.
Nothing is.
Please don't make me,
I don't care what you say,
It's not for my own good,
It's not going to make me feel any better
Just don't.
I have had the power to stop you,
But only before.
Now reduced to pleading,
I ask you one more thing,
Don't make me do it ever again.
Will it help me?
I thought not.
It's just making me feel worse,
Spiralling down,
down, down,
into the pits of despair.
Make me do it and you'll pay.
That is,
If I make it out ALIVE.

Another 5-minute poem (obviously not good)

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Re: Don't make me

Post by Hazel on Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:34 pm

What do you mean "obviously not good?" I thought it was fine. It was a great poem! Very Happy

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Sat Jun 28, 2008 1:10 am

Me too, I thinks it's great Very Happy I like the ending the best.

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Re: Don't make me

Post by BPahl88 on Sat Jun 28, 2008 2:41 pm

I agree with both MK and Hazel. That's a great poem! Smile

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