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Post by 2bAgen. on Fri Jun 27, 2008 7:06 pm

Trust.
What is it?
How do you do it?
I've long forgotten,
The last time I remember doing it,
Is ages past.
Teach me again,
So I can,
Finally,
Be the same,
Trusting and loving and caring,
I need to know,
I need to remember,
Please, or else,
I'll die alone.



A 5-minute poem that I wrote when I was bored.

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Post by Hazel on Fri Jun 27, 2008 8:35 pm

Great poem! Well done! Very Happy

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Sat Jun 28, 2008 1:12 am

Great poem! I really liked the beginning Very Happy Great job, espically for a poem written on 5 minutes.

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Post by BPahl88 on Sat Jun 28, 2008 2:39 pm

VEry nicely writen. That was a great poem! Very Happy
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