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Falling Night

Post by xStarr_x3 on Tue Jun 24, 2008 4:10 pm

Darkness engulfs my vision,
Dimming everything.
The dying rays of sunlight,
Fill the room with sepia.
The sun disappears,
Drawing all light with it.
My vision goes blank,
It's utterly dark.
A waving hand,
I cannot see.
Nothing's here,
Nothing.
Everything has disappeared
With the dying rays of bronze.
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I actually came up with this last night as I was trying to go to sleep.

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Re: Falling Night

Post by Hazel on Tue Jun 24, 2008 7:55 pm

Wow this is really good! I especially love the first three lines Very Happy

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Re: Falling Night

Post by BPahl88 on Tue Jun 24, 2008 10:10 pm

Very nice poem. Very Happy
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Re: Falling Night

Post by Moonlite Knight on Tue Jun 24, 2008 10:56 pm

Great poem, I reeally liked the ending the best Very Happy

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