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Post by BPahl88 on Mon Jun 23, 2008 2:45 am

I'm just typing this right now. No forword thinking at all. I don't even know what to write about yet. I hope it turns out good...

Ice Cream

Ice cream.
Vanilla. Chocolate. Strawberry.
A mix of all three.

Ice crream.
Milky.
Creamy.
Soft and delegate.

Ice cream.
Every scoop.
Every cone.
Delicious. Good. Yummy.

Ice cream.
In a box.
In a tub.
Pint. Quart. Gallon.
All sizes.

Ice cream.
Melty.
Rich.
Supreme.
Cold.
All of the above.

Ice cream.
Ice cream.
Ice cream.
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Okay. Yeah. That was not my best. I know. This is just a quick read to make you hungry I guess. He he. You can say it was bad. I know it is.


Last edited by BPahl88 on Mon Jun 23, 2008 5:31 am; edited 1 time in total (Reason for editing : I had some flaws to fix.)
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Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon Jun 23, 2008 5:05 am

It made me want to eat ice cream Very Happy I liked the second stanza the best Very Happy You know, My best friend and I call the mix of Vanilla, Chocolate, and Strawberry choconillaberry Very Happy I love ice cream! Great poem. Just one questions, what does "delaget" mean?

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Re: Ice Cream

Post by BPahl88 on Mon Jun 23, 2008 5:32 am

Whoops, sorry. It's supposed to be "delegate". I can't spell for the life of me. Embarassed
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Post by Hazel on Mon Jun 23, 2008 5:59 am

Great poem! I love ice cream! Very Happy

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Re: Ice Cream

Post by xStarr_x3 on Mon Jun 23, 2008 2:41 pm

Super descriptive, BP. Now I want to eat ice cream..

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