I dont get it!

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I dont get it!

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Wed Jun 18, 2008 5:53 am

I dont understand
I dont get it
I wanted it didnt I?
I did want it

But now I have it
And its not just one it
Its its
I have all of it
everything
all of them

And yet
It brings me no joy
no happiness
not even pride

I
I just fell
I dont know
empty

I guess the anticipation was more than the real prize
But I wanted it
I worked for it
I won
I
I.......

I dont know
I dont get it
I wanted it
didnt I?
or was it someone else's wants
and I got what they wanted
but I thought I wanted it
I suppose I didnt really

Now what?
What should I do know
What do I want?

I dont know
And
I dont get it! Mad

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Re: I dont get it!

Post by Hazel on Wed Jun 18, 2008 6:02 am

Great Poem! Very Happy That was good Very Happy

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Re: I dont get it!

Post by Moonlite Knight on Wed Jun 18, 2008 6:34 am

I agree, it was really good! Very Happy

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Re: I dont get it!

Post by BPahl88 on Fri Jun 20, 2008 3:58 pm

I agree indeed. It was very good! Very Happy

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