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Not That Kind of Father

Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon Jun 16, 2008 4:33 am

You’re not that kind of father
Who showers hugs
And kisses goodnight.

You’re not that kind of father
Who shows how much he
Cares, all of the time.

You’re not that kind of father
Who knows what I want
Before I know myself.

You’re not that kind of father
Who’s young and famous
Renowned worldwide.

You’re not that kind of father

But it doesn’t matter.
Because
You’re my father
And
I'm your child
Forever.
~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~ Like a Star @ heaven ~
~Have a safe and happy Father's Day~

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Re: Not That Kind of Father

Post by jeberexa on Mon Jun 16, 2008 4:18 pm

Wonderful! I loved it!

I especially like that you released it on father's day!

10/10! Very Happy Very Happy Very Happy
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Re: Not That Kind of Father

Post by Hazel on Mon Jun 16, 2008 8:11 pm

Oh this is so good! And it's really sweet! Very Happy

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Re: Not That Kind of Father

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Mon Jun 16, 2008 9:11 pm

Thats such a sweet poem, I like it.

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Do not cry when I am gone
To make me feel that I am loved
You'll see me just beyond the dawn
Or maybe look above
Do not cry on my behalf
Instead stand up, yes, get up and laugh
I wouldn't even care
So remember me but do not cry
I am not even there
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Re: Not That Kind of Father

Post by BlackOpal on Mon Jun 16, 2008 11:37 pm

Aw, it's cute.
Not all father-son relationships are necessarily picturesque.
I love it.
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Re: Not That Kind of Father

Post by Moonlite Knight on Tue Jun 17, 2008 12:25 am

Thank you everyone Very Happy I'm glad that you all liked it.

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Re: Not That Kind of Father

Post by BPahl88 on Sun Jun 22, 2008 5:31 pm

That was very good. I agree with jeberexa, I like how you released it on Father's Day. Very Happy
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