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Post by Hazel on Tue Jun 10, 2008 11:55 pm

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Re: Sorry

Post by Moonlite Knight on Wed Jun 11, 2008 7:29 am

Nice, I like the message, and the way you ended it. Great poem! Very Happy

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Re: Sorry

Post by jeberexa on Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:15 pm

I don't wanna be mean or anything, but my honesty makes me admit I did not like that poem. For many reasons. One being my mom always says sorry fixes nothing, you must act sorry.

My teacher also used to always say, "Don't say sorry, act sorry!"

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Re: Sorry

Post by Hazel on Thu Jun 12, 2008 4:05 am

Yeah that's ok, it's just a poem not a lecture....ur not entitled to like everything I write, thanks for reading it though Very Happy

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Re: Sorry

Post by Moonlite Squire on Sun Jun 15, 2008 4:32 am

Thats a nice poem,i liked how you ended it. Very Happy

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Post by Topaz on Mon Jun 16, 2008 3:01 pm

great poem! Razz

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Re: Sorry

Post by BPahl88 on Sun Jun 22, 2008 5:34 pm

Very nice poem. And I just have one comment, I believe that as long you really mean that you are sorry, saying it is okay. Just my opinion though. Still, great poem! Very Happy

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Re: Sorry

Post by xStarr_x3 on Sun Jun 22, 2008 9:11 pm

I really liked this poem. Stanza one was my favorite.

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