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Post by Hazel on Tue Jun 10, 2008 11:41 pm

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Last edited by Hazel on Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:49 am; edited 1 time in total

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Wed Jun 11, 2008 4:56 am

Nice, I liked it Very Happy espically the first two stanzas, and the last two lines. Those two lines made me laugh.

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Post by jeberexa on Wed Jun 11, 2008 10:16 pm

I liked that you made the stanzas rhyme! I reall liked that poem.
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Post by Moonlite Squire on Sun Jun 15, 2008 4:36 am

Open your eyes
Dare to look
You will not die
To open a book

LOvEd those stanzas Laughing
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Post by BPahl88 on Tue Jun 24, 2008 4:05 pm

Very nice poem. The ending was the best in my opinion. Smile
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