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Kiss the Snake

Post by OliviaLuna on Wed Jun 04, 2008 3:31 am

Do you try to touch it?
Do you try and feel it?
What person would?
Would you do it?

I don't need some thing more than what I have
I dont need you
I dont need it
I dont need anyone

Do you dare touch me?
Do you dare try?
Whos to say Im not a snake?
As evil as you might be?

Maybe I am more than evil....
Maybe....

Don't forget to ask yourself?
Could I be a snake?
Or as kind as a panda?
Then again
The panda can have a dark side too...

I'm a sanke or am I?
Am I?
Or are you?

Don't get too close
I always say
I'm a snake
Wait!
Don't run away!
Don't leave
I didn't mean to scare

I'm just a snake
Don't kiss the snake
Don't touch the snake
But you can see the snake
I'm the snake
Me
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Re: Kiss the Snake

Post by Hazel on Wed Jun 04, 2008 7:50 am

Wow this is really good...great poem! Very Happy

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Wed Jun 04, 2008 11:23 pm

I agree, that was awesome!

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Re: Kiss the Snake

Post by BPahl88 on Wed Jun 25, 2008 3:40 pm

That was a great poem. I think there are some errors, but I'll fix them for you. Smile
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Re: Kiss the Snake

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Wed Jun 25, 2008 6:05 pm

Great job, I like it!

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So remember me but do not cry
I am not even there
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