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Learning Injection Commercial

Post by jeberexa on Tue Jun 03, 2008 7:21 pm

I was going through my old computer and found a treasure trove of stories! This is a commercial script I wrote for a play some students and I did in Language Arts. Yes, Harry is is harrygz on this forum. Enjoy! Very Happy

By the way, we had to invent a whole NEW product.

Commercial Script *.*.* (2nd Period)
Cast:
Jacob-Grover Cleveland
Harry-Harry
Zach-Zach

(scene starts with two students in Schmaco Bell sitting at a table)
Zach: I sure wish we didnít have to go to school every day!
Harry: Yah, me too. If only there was a pill or shot, or something that we could take to learn things. Itíd be so much quicker!
Zach: Definitely!

(Grover Cleveland walks in carrying a shot)
Cleveland: Now presenting, the new and improved, Learning Injection! With the Learning Injection, all things are possible. Not to mention you donít have to go school! Itís an amazing new scientific breakthrough, allowing you to give yourself one, not-painful, shot a day. The shot immediately injects into your memory a full day of learning and growing. So come buy this shot, only 299.99 per school year!(Zach and Harry look at each other)
Harry: (whispering to Zach) Wow, this is amazing!
Zach: (whispering to Harry) Yah!

Cleveland: Since you two seem to be skeptical, hereís your first shot free!
(Cleveland throws a shot to Zach)
(When Zach catches it he immediately smiles, stands up, and starts to sing his song)
(When Zach starts singing Jacob exits to stage right)
Zach:
Learniní injection
You stab it in you
You spin around a couple times
And thatís all you do
Learniní injection
(Zach continues singing, repeating the song. Jacob has changed costumes and is now a student trying to study)
Jacob: Ahh, will you stop singing!
(After complaining for awhile, Harry then takes the shot out of Zachís hand and injects it into Jacob, who is still studying. Jacob immediately smiles, stands up, and starts to sing with Zach. Once Jacob and Zach sing one repeat, Harry joins in too. After the last repeat of the song, the commercial is over)

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Post by Hazel on Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:28 pm

Haha cool, that was funny, it's true that would be cool if we could take a shot and learn stuff intsead of going to school! Very Happy

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Post by jeberexa on Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:42 pm

Thanks! I really didn't think it was that good, but we got a 100 on our grade for it! Smile
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Post by BPahl88 on Thu Jun 05, 2008 5:56 pm

I remember this. This was funny. I think we got a 99, but I will admit, yours is better than mine. (Even though I still think it's creepy to STAB it in you...)
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