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Post by xStarr_x3 on Tue Jun 03, 2008 2:53 pm

A claw of lightening tears through the sky,
Reaching for the Earth,
Greedy for what it can't have.

It emits a shriek,
Begining a fearful descent,
Tearing clouds in two.

The clouds rumble and moan,
Crying out thier distaste for all to hear.
The lightening, upon hearing, stops.

It waits.
Listening.
Silence.

As quick as it had come,
It disapears.
Gone.
All hopes of touching Earth lost.
Leaving a pool of despair.

An empty sky.
Filled with clouds,
Still mumbling thier disgrace.
Then silence.
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Re: The Storm

Post by BPahl88 on Tue Jun 03, 2008 4:58 pm

That was very good! Very unique. I like more rymming poems, but still! It was about one of my favorite subjects, so I give you...

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Re: The Storm

Post by xStarr_x3 on Tue Jun 03, 2008 5:04 pm

I came up with it when it stormed really badly that other night. It changed a little.. but atleast I remember it!

Thanks!

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Post by BPahl88 on Tue Jun 03, 2008 5:06 pm

Your welcome... Very Happy
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Re: The Storm

Post by Hazel on Tue Jun 03, 2008 8:25 pm

Awesome poem Starr! Very Happy

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Post by xStarr_x3 on Wed Jun 04, 2008 4:25 am

Thanks. Very Happy

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Re: The Storm

Post by Moonlite Knight on Wed Jun 04, 2008 5:36 am

That was really good! I liked it! Very Happy

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