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Everything and Yet Nothing

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:05 pm

I want to tell you everything
Yet I can tell you nothing

I want to give you everything
Yet I can give you nothing

I want to love you every day
Yet all I can give you only today

I want to tell you I'll be there tomorrow
But I don't know that I'll even be here today

I can't understand how I know you
I can't understand how I care
I can't understand how I love you
I can't understand how I'm there

I look to tomorrow
yet I'm stuck in today
I can relive my past
For I am drifting away

Though I want everything for you
I can give only my word
That I know I will always love you
Even when I'm gone
Drifting away, flying toward the heavenly sky
Just like a golden bird

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To make me feel that I am loved
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Do not cry on my behalf
Instead stand up, yes, get up and laugh
I wouldn't even care
So remember me but do not cry
I am not even there
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Re: Everything and Yet Nothing

Post by Hazel on Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:06 pm

Oh wow, i think this is one of your best ones OoB. Super good. Very Happy

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Re: Everything and Yet Nothing

Post by Moonlite Knight on Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:10 pm

I agree! Its awesome, espically the last stanza. It's almost like a song at first. Awesome! Very Happy

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Re: Everything and Yet Nothing

Post by BPahl88 on Mon Jun 02, 2008 12:32 am

I like how you did like opposites. These are prime examples. (I don't know how you do that quote thing)


I want to tell you everything
Yet I can tell you nothing

I want to give you everything
Yet I can give you nothing

I want to love you every day
Yet all I can give you only today

I want to tell you I'll be there tomorrow
But I don't know that I'll even be here today

I give it

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