I Want You To See It Through My Eyes

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I Want You To See It Through My Eyes

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Sun Jun 01, 2008 11:03 pm

I want you to see what I see in you
I want you to see you how I saw you
I want you to see the real you I see
Instead
I see someone else
I see someone different
I see someone not worth of fighting for

But I want to see you
The real you, I see
I want to know you like I did before
Before all this happened
Before you changed

I want to see you like that again
I want you to see how I saw you
I want to see my friend

I want you to see you before it all changed
Before
Before this happened
Before this thing came, and when and came again

I want you to see you how you were when I met you
I want you to see how you were when it left
I want you to see how you were when it came back
I want you to see how I see you now
I want you to see how I have always seen you
I want you to see how I will always see you

I want you to see you through my eyes

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Do not cry when I am gone
To make me feel that I am loved
You'll see me just beyond the dawn
Or maybe look above
Do not cry on my behalf
Instead stand up, yes, get up and laugh
I wouldn't even care
So remember me but do not cry
I am not even there
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Re: I Want You To See It Through My Eyes

Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon Jun 02, 2008 12:30 am

Awesome poem! It's great, espically the second to last stanza. Very Happy

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Re: I Want You To See It Through My Eyes

Post by BPahl88 on Tue Jun 24, 2008 10:29 pm

Nice poem! I like the first stanza the best, actually. Very Happy
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