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Doubt

Post by Moonlite Knight on Thu May 29, 2008 1:21 am

I dream
In the shadows.

I hide
In the light.

I grow
In the darkness.

I die
Instead of fight.

Im so many things,
Yet nothing at all.

Unless you keep heart,
I shall never fall.
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I wrote this poem while taking a break from Math homewrok. Please tell me what yo uthink, thanks! Like a Star @ heaven

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Re: Doubt

Post by Hazel on Thu May 29, 2008 2:13 am

Ohh this is really good! And super true! Very Happy

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Re: Doubt

Post by BlackOpal on Thu May 29, 2008 11:19 am

Ooh, great job!
I really like it.
I LOVE the first two lines.
Fantastic. Very Happy

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Re: Doubt

Post by BPahl88 on Thu Jun 26, 2008 8:57 pm

Very well writen! This is one of those poems that is short, but has a lot of meaning to it.
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