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Post by Hazel on Mon May 26, 2008 7:14 pm

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Last edited by Hazel on Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:50 am; edited 2 times in total

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Re: The End

Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon May 26, 2008 7:46 pm

Wow, that was really good! I liked it. My only critic is that in the second to last line,m you might have mispelled "mey" is it supposed to be "may"?And this part "so to live forever" is kind of confusing.

But, besides that I really loved this poem, espically the last stanza! Great job! And I guess cleaning your room s actually helpful. I should clean mine someday soon Very Happy

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Re: The End

Post by Hazel on Mon May 26, 2008 7:49 pm

There we go...those were a few typos, all fixed. Thanks for pointing them out to me...and i'm glad u liked it.... Very Happy And i guess i should clean my room more often who knows what else i'd find.. Razz

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Re: The End

Post by Broken Heart on Tue May 27, 2008 12:12 pm

Awesome poem!!!
There is never an end for those like us
I loved this line =]

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Re: The End

Post by jeberexa on Tue May 27, 2008 4:24 pm

Nice poem! I really love when people write mysterious poems like that...ones that just make you think and wonder... Smile

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Re: The End

Post by Darklady on Sat May 31, 2008 7:51 pm

Yes. Kinda makes me think of my immortality. Jk wahahhaa!


Its a great poem. Smile

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Re: The End

Post by BPahl88 on Mon Jun 23, 2008 3:34 am

Great poem. Very deep. Very Happy

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