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Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri May 23, 2008 11:56 pm

I wish upon a star tonight
And hope you won’t leave at midnight,
For when the clock strikes twelve this night,
The darkness will consume this light,
And thus, obscure out sight.
But I will wait, cheerful and bright.
For you my shining, armored knight
To step into the soft moonlight,
And save us from our perilous plight.
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This poem is kind of pointless, sorry. I wrote it while thinking about how my friend
thought that Moonlite and Knight rhymed, only to relaize that she had misheard as
Moonlight and Knight. That made me think about how many words did rhyme with
Knight, so I wrote this just to experiment. Please tell me what you think, thanks! Like a Star @ heaven

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Post by Hazel on Sat May 24, 2008 11:49 pm

Whoa that was cool how you rhymed ever line, that must've been hard. I thought it was good and it was fun to read. Very Happy

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Post by BPahl88 on Fri Jun 20, 2008 4:25 am

That was neat. I agree, it's was cool how you rhymed each and every line. Smile
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Re: Knight

Post by OliviaofBolivia on Fri Jun 20, 2008 2:33 pm

I agree as well, I like it!

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I am not even there
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