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Dreams

Post by Hazel on Fri May 16, 2008 10:52 pm

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Last edited by Hazel on Wed Jul 22, 2009 5:43 am; edited 1 time in total

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Re: Dreams

Post by BlackOpal on Fri May 16, 2008 11:11 pm

Good poem.
I liked the last verse.
Keep it up.
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Re: Dreams

Post by Moonlite Knight on Fri May 16, 2008 11:18 pm

I agree, that was a really good poem. The first verse was the best, in my opinion. Good job!

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Re: Dreams

Post by BPahl88 on Wed Aug 06, 2008 4:06 am

Great poem. And I actually liked the first and the last stanzas the best. Very Happy
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Re: Dreams

Post by xStarr_x3 on Thu Aug 07, 2008 5:47 pm

That was amazing.
It fits what a dream is almost exactly, in my opinion.

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Re: Dreams

Post by Topaz on Mon Jan 05, 2009 3:29 pm

I can't seem to have good dreams! Shocked
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Re: Dreams

Post by 2bAgen. on Mon Jan 05, 2009 5:43 pm

Same. From the 1st I've had a four-part nightmare... I wonder if there's a sequel tonight...

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Re: Dreams

Post by xStarr_x3 on Mon Jan 05, 2009 8:17 pm

What's it about, 2b? O:

I had a nightmare the other night about the midevil ages..
-shudders- It was bad. That's all I'm saying.

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