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Post by Moonlite Squire on Thu May 15, 2008 10:19 pm

Sometimes when i go outside
people point and laugh and say hee! hee!
i don't look at them with the sigh
but get in a grummpy mood and say hi!!! Very Happy

I walk all the way past a crowd
with all the faces staring at me Shocked
i don't feel sad or mad!
I don't even feel bad!!
i walk past a gorcery store,
while all the people run out like theres a show.
I think its not fair to have purple hair.

I like it when see people me,
it dosent make me feel like their mean!! Wink

Last edited by Moonlite Squire on Thu May 15, 2008 10:21 pm; edited 2 times in total (Reason for editing : commas)
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Post by 017350 on Sat May 17, 2008 11:37 pm

Purple hair, huh? I like it.

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Post by Hazel on Sun May 18, 2008 7:03 pm

Great Poem!! Very Happy I thought it was really good.

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon May 26, 2008 2:23 am

That was a cute poem! Only, you need to fix the spelling a little, but still, good job! Smile


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