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Post by Hazel on Sun May 11, 2008 8:26 pm

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon May 12, 2008 2:31 am

Great poem! I love the first stanza the best. Great job! Very Happy

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Post by jeberexa on Mon May 12, 2008 9:08 pm

I like your poem! It makes you really think about a lot of things.

Keep writing!

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Post by BlackOpal on Mon May 12, 2008 9:44 pm

I like the "memories are eternal" concept.
Good job. Very Happy
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Post by BPahl88 on Sun Jul 06, 2008 5:05 am

Great job. I like the first stanza the best. Smile
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