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Post by Mr.Killerguitar on Sun May 11, 2008 3:20 am

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Orange
By Bradford Nathan Jesus Pirate Apple Killerguitar


Take a second or take two,
Go outside and make them scream at you,
Is there something I should know,
Is there something we should know,
Take a second or take two,
Go outside and make them scream at you,

World's a crazy place and you know that,
I hate that shadows following me,
I hate the shapes of good and wrong,
World's a crazy place and I know that,
Drunks in city and thats good,
Dead everywhere and we love that,

Take a second or take two,
Go outside and make them scream at you,
Is there something I should know,
Is there something we should know,
Take a second or take two,
Go outside and make them scream at you,

World's an insane place and you know that,
Bring that crap up and down,
Make you feel the way,
World's an insane place and I know that,
Sky is up and ground is down,
Dance the night 'till dawn,

And don't forget the spinning cat!
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Re: Orange

Post by 017350 on Sun May 11, 2008 1:37 pm

Nice. Decroptive words, rhyming words. And it's not so long that no one wants to read it, but not so short that they just go right on through it.

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Re: Orange

Post by Mr.Killerguitar on Wed May 14, 2008 2:02 am

Your word in god's ear, my best
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Re: Orange

Post by Moonlite Knight on Wed May 14, 2008 2:30 am

Nice, it was kind of like a song. I think it's really good. Nice rhyming and message.

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