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Never Fall In Love

Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon Apr 28, 2008 11:52 pm

I hope that I never fall in love,
If I am only destined to lose it.
May no one ever make me laugh
If I am marked to only blow it.
But still you came with your gorgeous smile
And I was unable to with stand it.
I went on that forbidden journey,
And now I can barley stand it.
Your memories haunt me day and night,
I wonder how you did it.
What is it about you that holds me
So tight that I can’t escape it.
I wish that I never fell in love
For I love you more than life itself.
Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven Like a Star @ heaven
This is my second attempt at writing something romantic. Did I succed in only embrassing my self? Please tell me what you thought. Thanks! Like a Star @ heaven

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Re: Never Fall In Love

Post by Hazel on Tue Apr 29, 2008 12:23 am

I don't that you should find it embrassing. Romance is usually hard to write...in my opinion. I thought that is was good.
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Re: Never Fall In Love

Post by BlackOpal on Fri May 09, 2008 12:55 am

Cute.
Very characteristic of a cautious lover.
Good poem. Very Happy
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Re: Never Fall In Love

Post by Moonlite Squire on Thu May 15, 2008 5:57 am

wow i am so shocked that u would say something like thet big sis!!!
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