Drabble, drabble!!

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Drabble, drabble!!

Post by Bran Davies on Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:09 pm

And here we see the invisible boy
In his lovely invisible house,
Feeding a peice of invisible cheese
To a little invisible mouse.
Oh, what a beautiful picture to see!
Will you draw an invisible picture for me?

-Shel Silverstein
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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by BlackOpal on Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:26 pm

I love Shel Silverstein, and I love that poem.
I don't know how many times I've poured over Where the Sidewalk ends, his poems are fantastic, funny, heartbreaking and heartwarming all at once.
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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by Artemis F. on Wed May 14, 2008 10:38 am

Very good, Bran. You grammer was right and everything!! *smirks*

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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by 017350 on Wed May 14, 2008 2:46 pm

This isn't actually a drabble. It's a poem.

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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by Topaz on Wed May 14, 2008 5:01 pm

It's a great poem!But how can you see what's invsible!? Razz
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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by Bran Davies on Wed May 14, 2008 7:33 pm

Well, it's just a poem. *laughs half-heartedly*
I don't really know how you could an invisible picture...
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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by Sofie on Wed May 14, 2008 7:37 pm

You draw it with words, of course.
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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by jeberexa on Wed May 14, 2008 8:34 pm

Nice poem! I have Where the Sidewalk Ends as well. His poems are wonderful! Very Happy
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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon May 26, 2008 2:24 am

I love that poem, and many of Shel Silverstein's other poems. They're reallly good. I guess you would draw an invisble picture, with invisible ink Very Happy

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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by Hazel on Mon May 26, 2008 2:31 am

I used to read Shel Silverstein but I haven't in a while, i don't remember many of them now...but that was a good one Very Happy

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Re: Drabble, drabble!!

Post by jeberexa on Mon May 26, 2008 5:49 pm

I love Shel Silverstein's poems! They always rhyme in such a whimsical, wistful, and witty way! Very Happy

Sorry about the cheesy alliteration.
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