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Post by ross007@comcast.net on Mon Apr 28, 2008 2:33 am

Everyone knows the sun will rise each morning.
Everyone knows the sun will set each night.
But the thing that worries us the most is will we be there to see it.
You see, we all we are going to die one day.
The thing that worries us the most is
The Time.
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Post by ross007@comcast.net on Mon Apr 28, 2008 2:34 am

This is depressing but tell me what you thought
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Post by Hazel on Mon Apr 28, 2008 3:37 am

Oh this is really sad.. Crying or Very sad But it is well written, good job Very Happy
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Post by laxboy36 on Thu May 01, 2008 6:41 pm

a little goth for me but nice job afro
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Post by jeberexa on Sun May 04, 2008 7:06 pm

It's a nice start! sunny
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Post by harrygz on Mon May 05, 2008 11:11 pm

I liked it! I didn't know you were so fluent in poetry. This is a great poem. Keep on writing.

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Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon May 26, 2008 2:29 am

That was a good poem! I made me feel kind of sad, but what you said is true. Great job! Smile

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