Classical Athens

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Classical Athens

Post by jeberexa on Sun Apr 27, 2008 6:30 pm

Again, another experimental poem. This time it's rhyming though! Colorful

Classical Athens

Athens is the place of free,
The birth of Western democracy.
A place of light and knowledge true,
That philosophers wisely pursue.


Welcome to the marketplace,
An exquisite trading showplace.
Come see the Parthenon and buildings like,
Temples of heaven, so dreamlike.
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Re: Classical Athens

Post by Hazel on Mon Apr 28, 2008 2:26 am

You did a good job rhyming, that was good. Very Happy
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Re: Classical Athens

Post by Moonlite Knight on Wed Apr 30, 2008 3:53 am

I agree with Hazel, that was good bounce

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