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A few poems

Post by Artemis F. on Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:55 pm

Just a few free-verse.

Imagination

If you are a dreamer, come in
A wisher, a writer
A lover, a mourner
A liar, a hoper
All are welcome to come in
Come in and stay with me
For I am all of these
And can relate

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Re: A few poems

Post by 017350 on Sat Apr 26, 2008 12:55 pm

Doesn't exactly rhyme. But it's good!

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Re: A few poems

Post by Bran Davies on Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:11 pm

running through the trees
running in the breeze
with your arms up high
night just nigh
amoung the flowers
and high plant towers
i run, just me
so wild and so free

Love ya poems, AF!!!
*grins*
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Re: A few poems

Post by BlackOpal on Mon Apr 28, 2008 9:25 pm

That sounds strangely familiar.
In fact, it sounds like this poem:
If you are a dreamer, come in.
If you are a dreamer, a wisher, a liar,
A hope-er, a pray-er, a magic bean buyer . . .
If you're a pretender, come sit by my fire,
For we have some flax golden tales to spin.
Come in!
Come in!

You really like Shel Silverstein, don't you?
I do too.
Maybe come up with something more original.
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Re: A few poems

Post by Bran Davies on Tue Apr 29, 2008 9:58 pm

Fun For Someone

I see
across the sea
I see you
and i see me
were laughing together
without a care
having fun in the warm weather
ah, the air
so much fun
and now it has begun
for those small figures
across the sea
to bad they're not you
to bad they're not me
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Re: A few poems

Post by Broken Heart on Wed Apr 30, 2008 12:15 pm

Wow Bran, I really like your poems!! There very good Very Happy
Artemis, your poem is very good too, and I can relate to it myself!! Very Happy
Good job, both of you *smiles*

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Re: A few poems

Post by jeberexa on Wed Apr 30, 2008 10:05 pm

BRAN- I liked one of your poems, but the last one wasn't as good. I especially didn't like the "ah, the air" part. It made no sense whatsoever to the rest of the poem.

The rest was good, though! Smile
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Re: A few poems

Post by ross007@comcast.net on Thu May 01, 2008 1:33 am

pretty good

actually i thought the ah the air had a lot to do with the poem
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Re: A few poems

Post by Bran Davies on Sat May 03, 2008 9:36 pm

Thank you all very much
for the comments and such
for I have more inspiration
in this tiny nation
when you care
to answer my prayer

It's kinda... subject changing, right? Oh, well. At least it ryhmed.
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Re: A few poems

Post by Minerva on Sun May 04, 2008 10:54 am

I like it! Nice, Bran!!
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Re: A few poems

Post by Artemis F. on Sun May 04, 2008 5:48 pm

The Girl

Look at the girl
Look how her startling blue eyes follow you
How her light-blond hair falls around her shoulders
She walks by you as gracefully as a crane
Catching your eye with a smile
Be careful, boy of green
For she is trouble

Guess who this is about?

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Re: A few poems

Post by Bran Davies on Sun May 04, 2008 6:00 pm

Left Of Me

Here, just Sam
torn to shreds
the hatred of the Ram
taking illigal meds
i cannot escape
for if i try
the graveyard cape
shall burden me, by and by
so i shut my mouth
and close my eyes
for the wind is headed south
and does not carry my cries
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Re: A few poems

Post by Artemis F. on Thu May 08, 2008 10:34 am

Love
Love can be given up easily.
For some, they don't deserve such trust.
Things such as love and hate can change in an instant.
So why trust anyone with such a thing?
Answer that in your own words.
It is for you to decide.


My poem.

My sister's poem

hey, you!
don't eat that shoe!
'cause it's mine!
not for you to dine!
now hand it back,
before you get a smack.

Yes, my sister is three years old.

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Re: A few poems

Post by Moonlite Knight on Thu May 08, 2008 10:44 pm

Lol, your sister's poem is sooo cute! I love it! Your's is really good too. It makes you think, and it's true. Good job to both of you! Very Happy

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Re: A few poems

Post by sweetkiss on Fri May 09, 2008 11:26 am

*smiles* Artemis your poems are wonderful. Even the one your three year old sister wrote. Bran, all I can say is magnificent job on writing the poems. And Artemis, whos the poem about??
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Re: A few poems

Post by Broken Heart on Fri May 09, 2008 11:29 am

I agree with sweetkiss. All the poems on here are amazing. Wunderbare Aufgabe.

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