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Post by Topaz on Fri Apr 25, 2008 1:11 am

horses run in the wind all day!
also horses can eat hay.
some horses die of water lack.
other horses run while your on it's back!
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Post by Hazel on Fri Apr 25, 2008 3:44 am

This is really cute and it rhymes really well! Very Happy
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Post by Moonlite Knight on Sun Jul 27, 2008 6:14 am

I agree that was cute! I really liked how you made each line rhyme Happy

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