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Rest in peace

Post by ross007@comcast.net on Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:24 am

I lie here of a mountain of pillows
My closed tight I am asleep
Yet my soul does not rest
There is nothing going on but Im still tense
I sit in at a table filled the world finest foods
But I still hunger
And I fake happiness so others dont take pity on me
It seems nothing matters anymore
Some call it unhappiness some depression
Yet there is no word fit to describe it
For it gnaws at your roots
And as I stand here dressed in black
The rain falls on my shoulders
Although I can not feel it
Because of the tiny stone tablet staring back at me
That reads here lies a friend, a son, and a believer
I turn around and swallow the knot in my throat
And I slowly walk away from the cemetery


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Post by ross007@comcast.net on Thu Apr 24, 2008 1:24 am

tell me if you liked it
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Post by Moonlite Knight on Mon May 26, 2008 2:27 am

That was really good! And kind of sad, to me. But, I still liked it.

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Post by BPahl88 on Fri Jun 20, 2008 4:28 am

That was good! I like how you put the time and date as well at the bottom. Very Happy
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